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Checklist: 10 mistakes not to make when creating a slogan

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Checklist: 10 mistakes not to make when creating a slogan
17/11/2024
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Checklist: 10 mistakes not to make when creating a slogan

Oh, the slogan. That little bit of phrase that captures the spirit of your business in a flash. Simple? Not really. Behind classics like “Just Do It” by nike or “Because I'm worth it” from L'Oréal, there are hours of reflection. And a bad slogan? It's like mismatched socks: it's noticeable, but not in a good way. Fortunately, we are there to avoid that.

Why does a good slogan make all the difference?

Picture this: you walk into a supermarket, surrounded by products that all scream “Choose me!” What gets your attention first? A powerful advertising slogan. A simple statement that tells a story, evokes an emotion, or solves a problem in the blink of an eye. Yes, a good slogan works like speed-dating: you have three seconds to seduce.

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The slogan is your brand's business card

A good advertising slogan is the voiceprint of your brand, the thing that is instantly associated with your business. Like a logo, but with words. Take “Because I'm worth it”: there's no need to even mention the brand, everyone knows it's L'Oréal. In a few words, you set the scene, you establish an identity, and you slip into the collective memory. Not bad for a short sentence, right?

50ème anniversaire de Because You're Worth It' - L'Oréal Paris

What is a successful slogan?

A good slogan is choosing the perfect combination of simplicity, emotion, and relevance. He must:

  • Be memorable : If you forget it as soon as you hear it, it is useless.
  • Awaken an emotion : Laughter, dreams, nostalgia... whatever, as long as it makes something vibrate.
  • Resonate with your target : It is not for nothing that “Haribo, life is beautiful” speaks to young and old alike.
  • Reflect your business : Your slogan should be a mirror of your business. No need to guess what you're doing if your slogan says it all.

A powerful slogan is your best ambassador. He speaks for you even when you are not there. So, it's better to give him a voice that carries... and that pleases!

10 mistakes to avoid for a perfect slogan

1. Too long is too boring

Use a short and impactful slogan. If your sentence sounds like a novel, no one will remember it.

  • Bad example : “Try to do what it takes to feel good with our products every day.”
  • Good example : “Just Do It.”

2. Be flat like lemonade without bubbles

Creating a slogan for your brand with no feel is bland and uninteresting. Make it vibrate, entertain, breathe in, or touch the heart.

  • The flop : “Our products are of high quality.”
  • The top : “Because I am worth it.”

Created by the Elias studio for the rebranding of Bigbuddy (sector: finance)

3. Copying others is risky (and useless)

Using an advertising slogan that is too similar to that of another brand will never make you stand out. Worse, you risk confusing your customers... and ending up in court.

  • Common error : Reuse a formula that works without adding your identity.
  • tip : Get inspired, but find your unique voice.

4. Ignoring your target is like talking to a wall

Your slogan should speak to your audience. An hook for teens will not be the same as for parents or professionals.

  • example : “Red Bull gives wings” speaks to dynamic young people.
  • Ask yourself the question : Who is my message for?
Redbull donne des ailes - Redbull

5. Too complicated to pronounce: no one will remember it

If your slogan is a tongue twister, it will quickly be forgotten. Prefer simplicity and fluidity.

  • Quick test : Say it out loud. If you stumble over it, review your copy.

6. Forget to link your slogan to your business

A good slogan reflects your products or services. Otherwise, it leaves your customers perplexed.

  • The blunder : An ice cream vendor with “Fire is our passion.”
  • The jackpot : “Magnum. Release the beast.”
Magnum - Libérez la bête

7. Not protecting it legally (ouch!)

There's nothing worse than finding out that your great slogan already belongs to another brand. Be sure to drop it off to avoid unpleasant surprises.

  • tip : Do a search at the INPI or with a specialized lawyer.

8. Do it only in French or English

If you're targeting an international audience, think bilingual or universal. A slogan that works everywhere broadens your reach.

  • example : “Just Do It” works in all languages.

9. Too serious, not human enough

Customers love brands that seem approachable and authentic. Inject a bit of fun, emotion or personality into your slogan.

  • Not that : “Excellence and perfection in everything we do.”
  • Rather that : “Finger Lickin' Good” (KFC).
Finger lickin' good - KFC

10. Don't test your slogan before you launch it

What sounds good in your head doesn't always work in the real world. Take the time to test your slogan with your team, customers, or even your aunt.

  • Classic error : Do not collect feedback.
  • tip : Ask several people what they remember about your slogan after only hearing it once.

How to create a memorable slogan

Creating a catchphrase for your brand is a bit like cooking a perfect recipe: you need the right ingredients, a pinch of creativity, and above all, avoid overdoing it. Here is a step-by-step guide to creating a catchy slogan that will stay in your mind.

Step 1: Identify your key message

Ask yourself this question: What do I mean in three words? Your slogan should reflect the essence of your brand. It's a promise, a mission or a simple idea that speaks to your target audience.

  • Example: Nike — “Just Do It” (Acting is all that matters.)
  • Tip: If you had to explain your brand to an 8-year-old, what would you say?

Step 2: Play with words

A powerful slogan is often rhythmic, catchy, and easy to repeat. Use techniques like:

  • The rhymes: “Mars, and we're going again.”
  • The alliterations: “Lidl, the real price of good things.”
  • Word games: “Orange, life is changing.”
  • Tip: Test your slogan out loud to see if it sounds good. If he passes the “mirror test” (repeat it without wincing), he is on the right track.

Step 3: Do some testing!

A slogan may sound great on paper, but how does it resonate with your audience? Test with your team, customers, or even friends before launching it to get honest feedback.

  • Tip: Make a “battle slogan” with two or three ideas and ask those around you to vote for their favorite one.

Conclusion: Your slogan, your signature

A good slogan is more than a sentence: it is the imprint of your brand. By playing with words, you can turn a simple idea into a powerful formula that leaves a big impression. Short, emotional, and true to who you are, it reflects your values while capturing attention.

Take the time to refine your slogan. Test, refine it, and keep looking until you find the best one. And if you need a hand, Studio Elias is there to transform your ideas into a memorable signature. 🚀

Book a call with one of our experts to get some advice.

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